My name is something I must be, all seven letters containing only me.
My name M-A-R-I-S-S-A was wrote down on paper one day, July 8th the call came in, saying its time for this journey to begin.
My name meaning "of the sea"
My name meaning there is many things I can be.
My name shines as bright as the sun, but with light comes darkness, darkness for dedicated decision to fulfill my purpose
My name is so serious, but me I'm so curios, there is many things for me too see.
My name meaning "Warrior"
In this big world I fight for my purpose.
The poem had a very nice flow to it.
ReplyDeleteI like how you're fighting for your own purpose and going your own way
ReplyDeleteI like the rhythm to it and nicely written
ReplyDelete👤👏👏👏👏good job. I liked the first line
ReplyDeleteLoved the last line "in this world I fight for my purpose." Also enjoyed your poem !
ReplyDeleteI like the "I-s-s-a" rhymed with "one day."
ReplyDeleteMarissa,
ReplyDeleteI really like the line saying, "July 8th the call came in, saying its time for this journey to begin." It reminds me of my second son's birth because he was actually a few days old before we decided on a name.
I enjoyed your poem and I really like the second line and how most of the poem rhymed.
ReplyDeleteI liked your poem. My favorite part was when you said "in this big world I fight for my purpose."
ReplyDeleteI enjoyed your rhymes.
ReplyDeleteI like the meaning and feelings you put into it.
ReplyDeleteI like the rhyming in your poem. I also like the name Marissa I never heard someone named like that.
ReplyDeleteI liked how you explained what your name means and how you interpret it
ReplyDeleteI like how your poem rhymed. Your raw
ReplyDeleteI really liked how well your poem flowed and rhymed.
ReplyDeleteyour poem rhymed very well and I liked how you explained your name.
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